i really like your contents pages i think the strip of pink makes it really creative. I like the pictures used and I think that you can really tell its a pop magazine. I think the two page spread needs a little more in the background behind the text or in the spare white so that is looks more full.
I think that your front page is very eye catching and the colours used will attract to a younger audience. I feel that a little more information could be added just to make the front page more jam packed. :)
This is really exciting Abbey. I can see where the thought has come into this creation. I love the subtle tone that has been used with the use of rose and lemon colours, extremely beautiful! The only problem I have is with the white space on your double page spread. The contents page is a little 'bare' with the white space, it could do with either a rearrangement of your pictures and text or more information of whats in your magazine on it. Overall I think its developing incredibly, your pictures are great and look very professional! rill! keep up the good work abs!!! xxxxxxx
Looking at the magazine cover you can easily tell what the genre is, which is good! The background colour personally i think is too bright! also maybe you can add more text to make it look slightly busy.. because pop magazines usually are (I think)But overall you have achieved your main aim which was to make it look like the genre you have chosen.
I like the colours used on the cover which really suit the genre and the image us is well edited and good quality. I like the contents page the stories are done well and suitable to the magazine however I would fill up more of the white space. The layout of the double page spread is good and the photo used suits the story and the magazine genre :)
I like how you carried on the colour to the content page and double page spread. I like how the content page number is split up. I think that you need to cover up some of the white space on the content page. Maybe change the colour of the strip at the bottom of front cover to yellow to stand. hope this has helped :)
Lookint at the front cover, Contents page and double page spread, I can see you have used the same colours throughout it and you can tell what type of genre the magazine is by these colours. The photographs you have taken are well edited and took. Personally I would try and fill the white gaps on your double page spread a little more, and on your contents page. Overall I think that this is a good music magazine.
i really like your contents pages i think the strip of pink makes it really creative. I like the pictures used and I think that you can really tell its a pop magazine. I think the two page spread needs a little more in the background behind the text or in the spare white so that is looks more full.
ReplyDeleteI think that your front page is very eye catching and the colours used will attract to a younger audience. I feel that a little more information could be added just to make the front page more jam packed. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is really exciting Abbey. I can see where the thought has come into this creation. I love the subtle tone that has been used with the use of rose and lemon colours, extremely beautiful! The only problem I have is with the white space on your double page spread. The contents page is a little 'bare' with the white space, it could do with either a rearrangement of your pictures and text or more information of whats in your magazine on it. Overall I think its developing incredibly, your pictures are great and look very professional! rill! keep up the good work abs!!! xxxxxxx
ReplyDeleteLooking at the magazine cover you can easily tell what the genre is, which is good! The background colour personally i think is too bright! also maybe you can add more text to make it look slightly busy.. because pop magazines usually are (I think)But overall you have achieved your main aim which was to make it look like the genre you have chosen.
ReplyDeleteI like the colours used on the cover which really suit the genre and the image us is well edited and good quality.
ReplyDeleteI like the contents page the stories are done well and suitable to the magazine however I would fill up more of the white space.
The layout of the double page spread is good and the photo used suits the story and the magazine genre :)
I like how you carried on the colour to the content page and double page spread. I like how the content page number is split up. I think that you need to cover up some of the white space on the content page. Maybe change the colour of the strip at the bottom of front cover to yellow to stand. hope this has helped :)
ReplyDeleteLookint at the front cover, Contents page and double page spread, I can see you have used the same colours throughout it and you can tell what type of genre the magazine is by these colours. The photographs you have taken are well edited and took. Personally I would try and fill the white gaps on your double page spread a little more, and on your contents page. Overall I think that this is a good music magazine.
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